The beginning.

Lance woke, but his eyes didn’t snap open. He let them drift open cause he didn’t feel like moving. He was comfortable. He tried to remember how he had ended up on the carpet in his room, but when he realized he wasn’t in his room, he sat up and looked around. The area he was in was covered in a thick fog. Was this Inaba? But it hadn’t rained recently. Or had he been out that long. Surely his parents would have woken him up after a couple of days. He was beginning to panic. He leaned forward and pushed himself to his feet. As he did he noticed his bag and a long wrapped tube sitting a few feet away.

Then it all rushed to his mind and he fell to the floor as a headache throbbed hard in his head. He had been at Mitsuo’s house. Mitsuo wanted Lance to come over with all of his weapons. When he found out what Mitsuo wanted with them, he turned to leave, he got out side when…when. Then what had happened? As the headache pounded on he tried to remember, but as hard as he tried, whatever had happened was gone. He looked at the floor that he was now seeing for the first time. It looked familiar but that wasn’t important now. He had to figure out how to get home.

Once again he got to he feet and walked over to his things. His bag looked simple and small but in fact held quite a bit. He opened the bag and spilled out his contents to make sure everything was in order. He counted everything and was relived to see he still had his 5 knifes, 2 of them a butterfly, 3 daggers, and a set of 2 swords one known as a Kadachi and the other a Wakizashi. He had other bits and bobs, and MP3 player, headphones, DVD’s, Mangas, and a log book with his pen. He then realized that his Cell phone was nowhere to be found in his bag. He checked his pockets but to no avail. He got to his feet and walked around. He found it lying a few feet away. But on picking it up he looked at the battery only to see a small red bar. He didn’t even get to sigh in frustration when it flickered, put up a small picture of a battery with X eyes and a tongue sticking out before it turned off completely. He was now lost. His phone was his last hope against the fog. He would now be moving forward completely blind.

Take down and Revise.

Alright if anyone has read my last post or is looking for it don't panic i pulled it down. I posted the last part of my story and after reviewing it i decided to scrap it and try it from a different angle. So bear with me as i make revisions.

Character Bio for my P4 fanfic.

Well I got out my first chapter but haven't introduced my Main Character yet. Mainly because I've got to set up the premise first.

But I wanted to post a short bio on the character before i got to that point. So here it is.

Name: Lance Fermen

Age: 17

Male

Lance is a Foreign exchange student from America. Both his parents died in an accident when he was 10 he decided to take the money they left him and went to Japan to get away from being put in an orphanage. He landed in Japan and went as far as he could till he was sure he was safe. That place just so happened to be Inaba, Japan. He was sure that being here would hide him from the spotlight of the press so he could keep a low profile. He found a family who took him in, in exchange he taught them english and they taught him Japanese. By age 15 he was fluent in the language and got a job at Junes. He also picked up smoking to calm his nerves that he got every morning from his nightmares of his parents death (having been in the accident and seen both their bodies) He attends the high school and is currently a second year there. He is friends with Mitsuo Kubo, a strange boy who constantly talks of how everyone he knows sucks. Even Lance, but since Lance isn't good at making friends at school he sticks with Mitsuo as his lackey.

If there's anything that isn't clear or I should add more detail to tell me, and I'll work on it some more.